Wednesday, 17 August 2011

The Solitary Weeper

My venture in to blogging side kicked along with it another interest too. Writing poems - Yet another channel to let my madness flow through.

' The Solitary Weeper '

In a distant land, sitting to himself
A young lad’s teary eyes glossy, cold
Lay transfixed at the distant horizon
Motionless and lost in the tranquility of nature

Perturbed by his sudden outburst of tears,
Resting birds fluttered away cooing, cawing;
Wailing only louder in his hoarse baritone
Impulsively kicked the ground hard

Tears rolling down, sore eyes,
Clenched fist and pearly teeth baring
Muttered to his self
Uncanny and broken words

Concealed behind a tender foliage
I yearned to know, ‘What‘d happened! ‘
May be a heartbreak, shattered dreams
Or a fall out with dear ones

For sure, none can help him out
Takes sands of time to get over
Though etched deep in one’s heart
I knew he’d be better!

It ain’t new, I’d been through this
Fairly conversant I were of those
Life ain’t all that easy
Better tide over a good share of trails and tribulations

Making up my mind, quickly retreated
Through the overgrown heath
Treaded the same way back
Got in the crammed tram

I’d be gone forever-
A spider caught in its own web!
So shall the forlorn solitary weeper
With a mended heart,  out of his blues.

                                              

5 comments:

  1. wow!!! Thats sumthing great!! Reel-astic, u'r own story!!
    Adios!
    *likes*

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  2. wow! meaning ful n impressive! full of feelings! i still thnk u should've used rhymin words.. duno how u poets thnk! thts just an opinion! :) anywayz its very touchy!
    sindz

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  3. wow!! this is just amazing! u hv portrayed the young lad's feelings so awesumly...like they r ur own! :) gr8 work! luking forward to more of ur creations!
    Seno

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  4. wow sangeeth happy to see your blog quite interesting especially this poem simply superb i dont have words to express my feelings. go on my boy

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  5. i would like to name the poem as "tear drops in my heart". you have poured ur feelings in the form of poem, i can make it out but i m helpless. but i have one thing to say, take things in ur stride and make use of every opportunity that come in ur way, u will su......cc....ee......d. I see the spark in ur eyes....u r born to win.

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